Thanks Ragnar!
I find the white on black can be a bit overpowering as well, but I've checked the other colours including the pastels and grey tones... The white is the easier to read on a variety of screens. I'm hoping to find a way to make the writing a bit bigger than it is currently, and if I can find a grey tone that will work better and not be quite as bright, I may incorporate that later as well.
Otherwise, the only adjustment that I'd like to do is to add a comment section directly to my pages section, so that I can have questions and conversations about the story on the same page as the story, and not simply the blog post where I say what I posted.
Everyone has said that it's a good site, though I did get one comment about how the colourful buttons seemed a bit out of place... What do you guys think, buttons-wise?

Trying to create a world, even in words, is good occupational therapy for lunatics who think they're God, and an excellent argument for Polytheism. -S.M. Stirling
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